Sunday, 5 June 2011

Paradise [Chapter 4]



Chapter 4
"Yongbae??", he frowned.

The guy in the picture of her wallpaper was Yongbae. He looked happy in the picture. He took the picture together with the female Jeremy. Jeremy looked so cute as a girl. They looked like they're in a relationship.

Taeyang is his rival. Hanbyul had been in love with Taeyang for so long that Jonghun never had a chance to be with her.

He took his jacket and went out. He had to find the answer.

Doojoon is wearing a maid dress in his room.
"Why should I wear this stupid costume?!", he cried in the middle of his room.

Jungshin snickered from his spot on Doojoon's bed. "Because you lost a bet, dude".

Kiseop couldn't help it but laughed at Doojoon wearing a maid costume.

"I was going to say After School has longer legs than SNSD but you guys stopped me and forced me to put a bet on SNSD. This is so unfair!", he is half glaring at the evil Lee Jungshin, a guy from Dorm 3. He is smart as hell but he is an evil.

"Hey baby, why don't you turn around? It'll be nice if I can see your... ass", he smiled seductively and raised his eyebrows.

"Eww! You're a bad bad guy! Pervert!", Doojoon kicked Jungshin's skinny legs.

Suddenly, Jonghun came in. And he didn't knock. This was his first time coming in someone else's room.

Doojoon covered himself with a blanket.

"Why are you here?", Doojoon gulped. He felt embarassed.

"I want to ask you something or maybe two. Firstly, why are you wearing a maid costume?", Jonghun stared at the maid Doojoon.

"Just tell me what do you want to ask", Doojoon came closer to Jonghun who is still standing at the door.

"Ok, do you guys know who is Yongbae... I mean, Taeyang's girlfriend?", Jonghun looked at them, all of those three guys in the room.

"His girlfriend? Wow, he is quite popular among guys too, I mean this is the second time I heard a guy asked me who is Taeyang's girlfriend", Doojoon laughed.

"I am serious", Jonghun glared at Doojoon. Doojoon stopped. Jonghun looked scary when he's mad.

"I heard he is dating Hanbyul, the girl from next door school", Kiseop answered.

Jonghun got angrier but he didn't show it.

"If you really want to know the truth, you can ask Kim Dongjun. They are roommates and Dongjun is close to him. If you don't know him, he is our school top athelete.", the smart Jungshin suggested.

Jonghun left without a word and he didn't shut the door.

"Aishh!", the embarrased Doojoon shut the door immediately as soon as Jonghun left.

Dongjun is still running on a treadmill. He likes working out. The gym was full of students from Dorm 1. Dorm 1 is for those good in sports. Jonghun came in and stopped him on the treadmill.

Dongjun glared at Jonghun. He got angry. He hates it when people disrespected him.

"Who are you?", Dongjun stared at Jonghun from head to toe.

"Who is Yongbae's girlfriend?", Jonghun asked.

"Why would I tell you?", Dongjun smirked. Why would someone he never knew asked about his bestfriend's girlfriend. That was weird.

"Just tell me and this is an emergency!", Jonghun started to raise his voice. He couldn't controlled his anger. He is this type of person.

Dongjun eyes widen. "Why don't you ask Taeyang himself?".

Jonghun got angrier and he almost punch Dongjun on his face but someone stopped him.

It was Taeyang.

"Choi Jonghun. Talk to me outside", Taeyang looked at him in the eyes and brought him outside the gym.

"It has been a while... You never talked to me for like since 3 years ago", Taeyang smiled. He is a calm person.

Jonghun smirked. He hates talking to Taeyang. He hates seeing his face. He just hates him every now and then.

"Don't you have something to ask? Next time ask me, don't ask Dongjun. He knows nothing about my love life", Taeyang kept on smiling. He has such a naughty smile that Jonghun can't even tell whether he really is a calm person or he was mocking him.

Jonghun couldn't say anything.

"I have a girlfriend. She is the best thing ever happened to me. And she is not Hanbyul. I never loved Hanbyul. Never. To me she was just a sister. And if you hated me for that since 3 years ago, I feel glad that I'm telling you this now", Taeyang hold onto his phone and showed something to Jonghun.

"Here. She is pretty, right?", Taeyang smiled.

Jonghun knew that picture. The one he saw on Jeremy's phone. So, Jeremy is Taeyang's girlfriend. Not Hanbyul. He felt glad but he is still curious what is Jeremy's intention disguising herself as a man?

Thanks for reading.
I'm sorry I have the worst English ever but i'll try harder! Hwaiting! XDD

7 comments:

  1. i can't imagine doojoon. though i love his character in this ff.

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  2. lol this chap just completed my day
    thank u xD
    maid doojoon lmao
    i love it when doojoon oppa being bullied n all like that xDD *jumps around*

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  3. lol. i'll give you more doojoon if his character made you happy. lol

    XDD

    -Admin Gwibin

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  4. Doojoon oppa is the best.
    I like him here.
    Please update soon.

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  5. wah!!! cant wait for the next chapter! love it!

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  6. i don't think your fic inspired by hottie paradise at all except for a girl disguising as a guy and Dorm 1 Dorm 2,3 but i love the whole idea. this is one interesting fic. waiting for the updates!

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  7. Thank you guys for the feedbacks.
    I am down with flu right now so i guess i will update later?

    Yes, this is only inspired by "hottie paradise" in term of the character disguised herself and all those three dorms. I can't have all since that'll be called plagiarism and i need to have my own work too right?

    Thanks for lovin this fanfic anyways.
    will update soon <3

    -Admin Gwibin.

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